A poem for YOUR child - Treasure Inside ;)

[ToriElla]

My passion is poetry so I'm willing to let you stretch my mind and write for some of your kiddies. I do write properly (not published or anything!) but I'll do some baby ones for fun PM me your orders


Here's Dionne's two to start us off:

DIOR
Diamante sparkles and pretty pink
Innocent eyes with every blink
Obediently curious with delicate feet
Really easy to love, forever sweet

HARLEY
Heavenly scented little boy
A second glorious pride and joy
Rare, innocent, peaceful young dove
Lips sharing the dearest new love
Everything I’ve wished for now is complete
You are my angel - forever sweet


For the poster formally known as 'beanie':

SEREN
Serene with femininity, a star-like calm
Every mothers dream, my healing balm
Ruby red lips and enchanting face
Eternally mine you are delicate lace - that
No other child could ever replace


For Sarah:

BRAYDON
Beautiful son, my sun and my moon
Race with me in life but don’t grow to soon
Always be near me, and on me rely
You are my world – my earth and my sky
Delicate child, I will cherish these days
On my knee sit, let me study your ways
Never forget that you are my ‘sun’ (I was there when your life first begun)


For Urchin:

MASON
Masculine already you make me so proud
Already a charmer, appropriately loud
Such a good brother, person and son
One of the best things I could ever have done
Never forget that you are pure treasure (you bring your family everlasting pleasure)

BRODY
Bouncing baby you filled me with joy
Relax in my arms my fine-looking boy
One more child to complete the pair
Deliciously cute from your toes to your hair
You like your brother are a valued treasure (giving your parents even more pleasure)


For Xena:

LYDIA
Loved little girl, you will always be gold
You are my riches, to keep, teach and hold
Don’t fear anything I will always help you
In good times and bad, we will plough our way through
Another cherub now graces the earth (I have loved you from the moment of birth)


For Sami:

DAMIEN
Deeper love you could not find
All is yours - my heart, my mind
My body was ours, one and the same
Inside my blood is stamped your name
Eternal genes, everlasting bond
New person, of you I am forever fond

 

[K X]

Aww that's lovely! Have u got a degree in English Literature?

 

[missac]

they are so beautiful!! what a good talent, i am only good at limericks!

I haven't got my baby yet (I am still baking) but I do have two doggys called snoop and sweep who I love like babies! (and by the way I am not taking the p!)

 

[ToriElla]

haha no degree - can you tell?

 

[K X]

No, that was fantastic.

 

[sarah113]

they are really good

 

[Urchin]

That's great, do my 2!

Sorry too lazy to pm

 

[ToriElla]

Ok i'm working on:

Braydon
Mason
Brody
Lydia

in that order - no fighting ladies

Edit: I'm gonna put the list of poems in my first comment so they are easier to find x

 

[Dee1985]

just seen this thread. thanks for mine Vic means loads to me i love things like it
i am going to print it off in nice colours and frame them


made my night Vic

 

[Xena]

awww those are so sweet! could you do lydia please?

 

[ToriElla]

sarah im just about to start yours - have to let my brain cells rejuvinate and my creative juices flow.

Lydia is on the list.

Ok here's a question for you all - how much would you realistically pay for a framed, nicely printed poem online? I'm beginning to think there is a market - unless yous are a owt for nowt type of crowd?

 

[ToriElla]

bump - there you go sarah and urchin (brody is next)

 

[Urchin]

Awww they are really great, thanks so much!

 

[ToriElla]

glad you liked them

there you go Xena.

let me know what you think about my post above everyone if you get a sec! i need feedback if poss! xx

 

[Xena]

awww that's so gorgeous! thank you so much i love it

 

[ToriElla]

Urchin my poll should have an option saying - No i wouldn't buy it but it didn't work, can you fix it please??

 

[Xena]

haha there isn't an option that says "hypothetically i would buy one if i wasn't so ridiculously strapped for cash at the moment".

seriously i WOULD buy one, if i wasn't roughly £1000 overdrawn!

 

[ToriElla]

Thanks xena, it's just to see if there is a possible market for it. If real people would actually buy one. I'm just after honest answers x

 

[Dee1985]

yes i would for about £15.

but then you need to think of p&p might be a bit?

 

[ToriElla]

too true dionne my little gem, i shall have to assess the situation further i think!