Wedding Path

[mum2be?]

Hi girls.,

This is my wedding path, can i ask you to take a look & offer advise , point out things if anything wrong, spelling ect, as i want to give link to my family and need to make sure all ok first

http://vickiandjohnmoyet.weddingpath.com/57002

 

[Kylie1007]

Hello! This is the teacher here! Just had a quick look thru your wedding details and noticed a few bits! Hope you don't think I'm cheeky! I do this for a living! (although in the kids' books it's a lot harder to understand!!)


John proposed on July 2nd 2006 while we are in Cyprus - I would change to WERE


We are planning to marry at the Melia Caribe Tropical. More details will be availiable once we know ourselfs and have booked... OURSELVES

Wedding date to be comfired.... CONFIRMED

We will be having a celebration meal/party after the cermoney ... CEREMONY

You can get more details of resort by checking out first choice web site or in there Tropical Brochure.... I WOULD MAKE SURE THAT FIRST CHOICE HAS CAPS AS IT'S THE NAME. ALSO CHANGE THERE TO THEIR!

We will be flying with first choice and will be upgrading to star class premier seats. Which is also included in price... TAKE OUT FULL STOP AND MAKE premier seats, which is also included in price.

Its your Holiday!!!! - IT'S

until i have booked... MAKE SURE THAT WHENEVER YOU PUT "I" IT'S A CAPITAL I

 

[Emmylou]

Also.....on first page: March 2009(Aprox)....should be Approx. and need a space between ) & Approx

& in the honeymoon bit: then we can have a honeymoon for two weeks away from you lot later in the year !!!

Lovely site & a great idea!

 

[mum2be?]

Sorry girls only just relised about post forgot i posted

Thanks so much girls i am so useless at spelling