Once upon a time

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Once upon a time there was a lady whose name was Patience who was married to a kind man called Jontil and they lived in a lovely cottage on the edge of the woods. Patience had wished for a baby for a long time and was very sad that they didn’t have any children. Their cottage seemed very empty and they would often hear children playing in the other gardens nearby which made them feel sad. When they moved into their cottage, the lady next door whose name was Colere had just had a lovely little baby boy. Patience had been to see lots of witches and wizards but no one had been able to help them. One day she was coming out of the wizard’s cave when she saw her other neighbour Suffi talking to a kind witch about the baby she was expecting which made Patience cry and cry.

One day Patience visited a different Wizard on the other side of the woods; he was a clever little man with a brown face and said he could help them. He gave Patience a magic potion and told her to wait 2 weeks to see if it had granted their wish. He said it might make her feel a bit dizzy and unwell but she didn’t care. She took the magic potion but she still didn’t have a baby. She went back to the wizard and he told her to try again. She tried 2 more times but nothing happened and she was very sad.

During that time the Princess of the land had a lovely baby boy; Patience was very happy for her but wished she could have her own baby too. She went back to the wizard who said he would do a special spell for her; the magic had worked on other ladies before so Patience felt very hopeful and excited. They did the spell twice but still there were no babies for Patience & Jontil. Soon Suffi’s baby boy was born, he was beautiful and Suffi & her husband were very happy.

Months passed and Patience tried not to cry every day. One day she and Jontil got together all the money they had, gave it to the little brown wizard & asked him to do a special magic spell for them. Patience had to take lots of different potions which made her feel ill and then they both had to visit the wizard in his cave for the magic spell. Patience worked with some fairies in the town every day and the Head Fairy was very kind and let patience have time off to see the wizard. The wizard gave them an envelope with a piece of paper in it. He told them not to open the envelope for 14 days otherwise the spell wouldn’t work. If it had worked the piece of paper would have 2 lines on it, if it hadn’t it would have just one line.

Patience and Jontil wished and wished and soon it was the day to open the envelope. The piece of paper had just one line on. Patience cried and cried. Jontil eventually had to go to work so Patience got up, and as she looked out of the window she saw that Colere was expecting another baby. By now Patience and Jontil were the only couple in the village without any children and they felt very lonely. But they loved each other very much and tried hard to cheer themselves up.

Patience & Jontil went away to a far away land where it was warm and sunny and when they came back they felt a bit happier. The next evening Patience went to visit her sister who told her that she was expecting another baby. The same evening Jontil’s sister phoned and told him that she was expecting another baby too. They were both happy but had to try not to cry as well in case their sisters thought they were jealous.

Just before Christmas they tried the magic spell again, but again the piece of paper showed only 1 line. They also found out that the Princess of the land was expecting a 2nd baby! In the Spring they had another go of the spell with even more yucky potions but the magic still didn’t work. One day when Patience was in the house next door she saw a picture of another baby in Suffi’s tummy. She was so sad but didn’t say anything to Jontil because she was now so used to everyone having one or two babies except for them. They went back to see the wizard but this time the wizard told them that they had been wishing for a baby for so long that they might have run out of time. He told them to go and see a different wizard in a far away land.

The new wizard was tall and handsome with a nice smile and said he could help them. He sent Patience & Jontil to a young witch for some more spells and soon it would be time for them to come back for their final magic spell………..
 
Blueflower... is this your story? Its very touching and I so want it to be your happy ever after fairy tale ending xx
 
Oh, what a sad but beautiful fairy tale! I can't wait for the continuation and I am certain it will have a happy ending, one way or another.

Thank you for this x
 
Yes it is my story! I will write a nice happy ending for it and maybe it will come true!
 
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Aw this brought a year to my eye. I so hope the final magic spell works for you xx
 
Really hoping the final spell is the one hun. Always checking on u my lovely n always will.

Michelle.x
 
What a touching story , it really highlights how we all feel when we are surrounded by people who find it so easy to conceive! We have juxtaposed emotions , yes we are happy but incredibly sad as well that our time hasn't come yet. Is the princess in the story Kate (Duchess of Cambridge)? I felt the same when news broke of her pregnancies , very pleased but also quite envious ! Ashamed to say it but it can't be helped . You should publish the story Blueflower , it would be a useful tool both for people trying to conceive , but also those with secondary infertility or couples where one parent has children from a previous relationship etc , it speaks to everyone on so many different levels !
 
I hope you get your happy ending, I really do xx
 
That's kind Ragdoll, I didn't think it was good enough to be published though!!
I have another one about the journey of a sperm then embryo, I will find it!
Yes it is Kate Middleton, haha!
 
I'd be very interested in reading it Blueflower !
 
Here you go! I wrote it in August 2013 just before we started Clomid. Suggestions for a better title are welcome!

The Quest.​

I don’t have a name because there are so many of us and only one or two of us will ever get to be somebody, maybe not even that. I’ve seen my older brothers and sisters leave home; I’m mature now so it looks as if it might be my turn soon!

Oh! Here we go! We’re being propelled out! All I know is that I need to swim as well as I can and I will know what to do when I get there! There are millions of us leaving! It looks like over a hundred million! Unfortunately most of my brothers and sisters are disabled; a few of them can’t even move, poor things. That’s normal for us and for other dads apparently.

I’m just following the shoal! We seem to be travelling downhill which makes it much easier. When I was a baby I heard a few of my older sibling complaining that they had to swim uphill and it was almost impossible. I can feel some pulses as well which is propelling us along too.

I think we might be in the right place now, it smells different. Some of my siblings are touching the sides of the tunnel and the acid is killing them, I must keep going straight!

Now there’s a tiny hole, I need to aim for that….. Phew, got it! There’s some sticky looking stuff in here but it’s actually quite stretchy which is helping us along.

We’re now in a large chamber, there’s a lot more room in here, I’m not sure where to go now! Oh dear, loads of us haven’t made it. Some of the deformed ones are swimming in circles too. My dad has started taking these vitamins which is making sure that my new brothers and sisters are much healthier, I’ve seen much fewer forming with 2 heads or 2 tails or the wrong shaped body. There are still about 10 million of us still here anyway!

I’m getting tired now even though we are still going downhill; it feels like I’ve been swimming for hours! There’s not many of us left now, loads have become exhausted and just died. The male ones seem to be faster but the female ones are stronger, I suppose that gives us all a fair chance! Now there seems to be 2 different directions to go in, half of us are going one way, half are going the other, I’ll just have to use my instincts. Right, this way feels promising….

It’s much narrower in here but I can sense that we’re nearly there! I must try to get to the front! We’re not going downhill any more, I think my mum is lying down now! Keep going.

Wow! There it is! It must be! It looks amazing! I’ve heard about some of my older siblings getting to this stage but there’s nothing there and they’re just left feeling stupid! This happened for years apparently. Or sometimes they got there but couldn’t get in for some reason. It must have been really disappointing after all that effort. I also heard that if you get there a bit early it’s usually ok to wait, but you can’t wait too long! I could hear some of my siblings getting very excited waiting for their prize to emerge! It looks healthy, mature but not too old! Some of them are no good unfortunately. And hundreds are wasted every time.

What to do now? There really are only a few of us left now! I’m right up close to it. I really think I could be the winner! Just to look for a way in……..

The wall seems to be changing to let me in, is anyone behind me? No! They can’t get in! It’s me! I’m the winner!!! In I go! I must try to bind myself to the shell.

That was weird; I seemed to be dreaming for a few days. After I got in, it felt as if my head exploded and we kind of fused together and started dividing into different sections, all the time travelling back the way I came. I’ve become something other than myself; me and this other half have become something new!

We’re back in the large chamber and looking for somewhere comfy to latch on. I wonder how it’s going to work. It must be 10 days now since I won the race! I can feel myself hatching, it’s weird!

This looks like a good place; the lining looks quite cosy and seems to be accommodating me. I must dig a bit of the lining out and bury myself in tightly. I’ll wait here for a bit and try to have a rest, but I’m growing all the time. I wonder if I will get a chance to be somebody, when all my predecessors have failed?

Oh no, I seem to be coming away again, what’s happening? I’ve only been here a day. Maybe I’m not going to make it after all. The lining is coming away and me with it. I know this usually happens but I thought it would be different this time.

I’m thinking of my younger siblings now and willing them to succeed where I seem to be failing. I thought I might be the one to make the difference. I almost made it, but I’m fading now………..
 
What a beautiful story, I think this story could even make me smile on my darkest days. I hope you get the happy ever after end to your story
 
Sorry for the late response Blueflower I've been away ! Beautifully written piece once again , it really makes you take a different perspective and reminds you of little things that are overlooked in the big picture !
 
I'm trying to write a happy ending to 'Once Upon a time', I wonder why its so much harder than a sad ending? We've had loads of hurdles with the cycle already so I will need to change what I've written so far!
 
it's just taking a little longer than expected for the happy ending but they are always worth it in the end
 
Blueflower that is so lovely. It's been a long time since I checked in here, but I still think about you and all LTTCers often and I'm sad to see such a lovely person still waiting.

I still have every hope for you though, and when it does happen it will be so
much more special and amazing because you've hoped and dreamed for so long. If you do need to go down the egg donation route let me know and I will gladly help you out. 😊

Thinking of you all xxx
 
Hi Potternutter! Thanks! How are you? How is your little one?
 
I'm good thank you! She's great thanks, she was definitely worth the long wait and upset so don't give up hope ��
 

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