o/t but are there any poets out there?????

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  1. Iwant3

    Iwant3 Well-Known Member

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    I have my parents Ruby wedding celebrations on Sunday and they have asked if i will say a poem for them - My mum chose it, but there is one line in it that she doesn't like the last word - but cannot think of an alternative to the word or to the whole line if need be.....and neither can I!:wall2:

    so any ideas to replace the word below in red or the whole line it is part of if it makes it better?????

    Now is the time to celebrate lives
    As your Ruby Wedding Day arrives
    Savour each moment, reflect on the past
    Memories shared that forever last

    Contratulation and love we send your way
    A story of love on your Special Day
    A love that has lasted throughout the years
    sharing the laughter along with the tears

    Forty years ago, you were married today
    May your dreams be fulfilled in every way
    A wonderful day for a couple so complete
    To be part of your lives is such a treat

    Look back on this day and always recall
    Mum an Dad you are the best of all
    You're respected and loved, we cherish you
    Thank you for everything that you do

    When this magical day is over and done
    We wish you many more years to come
    In our hearts and souls your will always stay
    Mum and Dad

    Happy Ruby Wedding Day!

    i thought of 'can't be beat' instead of 'such a treat' but that seems just as bad, lol:roll:
     
  2. scn

    scn Well-Known Member

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    What about
    A wonderful day for a couple so true
    Good times and bad/hard times, you made it through
     
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  3. Iwant3

    Iwant3 Well-Known Member

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    you're good at this Karen!!!!! :) I like it............Thank you!
     
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    scn Well-Known Member

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    Glad you like it Angela, hopefully your mum will too. Is there a big party or a small family affair?
     
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    Dee28 Well-Known Member

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    Oh yes, very good! Xx


     
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    Balthazar1275 Well-Known Member

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    Love Karen's one its perfect

    Michelle x
     
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    T84 Well-Known Member

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    Aw love Karen's, I can't do better than that. Have fun at party :) x x
     
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    Iwant3 Well-Known Member

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    I'm going with your words Karen - thank you so much :)

    It's a relatively small party - I think about 15-20 people - ours are the only kids going so they will have plenty of attention :)
     
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    Sounds lovely, have a great time xx
     

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